Post 37: Short Film - First Draft + Feedback

We previewed our first draft to two students of our target audience and asked for constructive feedback that would help us to improve. In which, they suggested that we need to improve on the sound by enhancing the characters voices as at points they're too quiet. Also, we need to think more for match on action as a character was out of place in a scene. We therefore will take this feedback into consideration and use it to improve our final cut.