I asked a fellow student to give me some feedback on my magazine review and she suggested a few changes for me but also told me what she liked about it :
To improve :
- Add the title of the film - Only seen in small font at the moment.
- Add a rating of the film by the magazine
- Underneath the small picture have the font in italics so that it's not all the same
Good Areas :
- The picture is a still from the film - gives a insight to the characters
- Well written review - doesn't give too much away
- Easy to read and understandable layout
- Eye catching colour scheme
Therefore, i took these changes into account and improved my double page spread to the following :
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